you have a keen eye for composition and structure. it really shows here. daring and minimal at the same time, and using old school tapes is awesome seeing as theyre pretty much booted by bloody dvds. chipper.
Not sure really...it just seems distracting. I think it's the way that it's smeered on her face. My mind want's no smeering and only red lips. But it is something I can live with. I love the image and I see why you have it smeered. It's all good.
I just wanted something... i don't know... I didn't want to have her hurt or cut - I wanted her to be messy and laid back and sluttish, subliminally my mind was doing these things without permission, but I think my mind is ok.
the space around
the shapes relating
the slightly dirty feeling
the object connections
the angles relating
i can't give an advanced critique unless i know more about what the concept or motivation is behind a piece and maybe the overall direction the artist is going with their work as a whole. which i would be happy to do here if you wanted to go into some of those things.